Create Me

Create Me

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

Create me
As I stand before you.

Draw the very lips
You wish to fall in love with.
Pop in the eyes that
Will always leave you in a daze.
Mold out the curves that
You would love to touch.
The perfect tongue that
Could gracefully caress yours with each kiss.

Create me
As I stand before you.
I'm all yours.
Just yours.

© 2014 I Am Svetlana



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Absolutely beautiful work! It feels weightless, but has so much depth.
We are all shaped by the people around us, but willing for it to happen or being conscious of it implies a whole other experience. The sort of love you feel here is made clear, and I'm sure all those who have felt this form of love recognize it immediately.
Thanks for sharing this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Excellent. You're a catch huh? A masterpiece in the making? Letting others manifest your being for you, I wouldn't call that lazy, so much as innovative. Though it'd be preposterous for me to try and make you or anyone else of an image not from within (whatever the heck that means). Of course you do well in writing, so maybe you needn't have to borrow or beg for outside services.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful. So well done. Very clear and full of power.

Posted 1 Year Ago


nice writing, i really loved it.
Create me
As I stand before you.
I'm all yours.
Just yours.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Wow that was a very very image of beauty you created:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Marvelous. So fluid. It makes me think of a woman who loves unconditionally. The theme of changing yourself for another is selfless and evocative of the need for love.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lacking better current words, "Bloody Hell, this is good!"
It's also multi-dimensional, inspiring "Who says that....and where do they assemble them?" But at the same time, a tender announcement, "I am willing to be your rope...Don't hang yourself!"
Awesome piece
Thanks for the share!


Posted 1 Year Ago


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Very nice poem. I like the title very much "Create Me " :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


To give oneself
holding nothing back
asking for this person to create a reality of you and him

this is stunning

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sensual piece...creatively written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


A gentle reminder and indicator of love just beginning to bloom. It reminds me of a time when I was younger and my relationship was just beginning to bud. Lightless.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



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"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 25 years old. I .. more..

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