Create Me

Create me
As I stand before you.

Draw the very lips
You wish to fall in love with.
Pop in the eyes that
Will always leave you in a daze.
Mold out the curves that
You would love to touch.
The perfect tongue that
Could gracefully caress yours with each kiss.

Create me
As I stand before you.
I'm all yours.
Just yours.

Reviews

[Kye R H]

Absolutely beautiful work! It feels weightless, but has so much depth.
We are all shaped by the people around us, but willing for it to happen or being conscious of it implies a whole other experience. The sort of love you feel here is made clear, and I'm sure all those who have felt this form of love recognize it immediately.
Thanks for sharing this!

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome poem! It's a fascinating concept....the thought of basically making your perfect person in you. Since I am 30 and divorced I guess creating the perfect person would be awesome and easy.... but even then would she even really be perfect? Lol Awesome writing :)

[Alisa Js]

Very sweet and full of underlying passion.

Nicely done, you.

Alisa💫

[Astrid]

Very romantic and intimate. A stunning piece of art. Just the words "create me" are powerful. To create someone, to build them up, to form them, to bring them into existence, make them art and love in duality.
Just breathtaking in essence.

[Jamestown]

You are correct, I see the similarities. You are so talented, keep up the awesome work.

[Afraa]

I love the jigsaw puzzle kind of theme you used here. Simple, yet very creative, and well thought out. Words of purity indeed. This was an enjoyable read for me!

Thank you for sharing!

[Shane Mohamed]

It is full of love and lust and passion. You've expressed yourself quite vividly. I hope that the relationship continues!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A unique and telling piece that stares into beauty in the delivery, well done, good read.

[Ethan Brill]

I do that all the time. I wish you all knew to come to me.

[Cindy Marietta]

This is beautiful. I love the emotion that rings of completely giving up yourself to someone you love. Great write.

[1Disawsum]

Wow... this poem feels so light, in contrast to the words and the meaning behind it. Create the one, true and perfect piece of art, and to treasure and keep it forever... wow. Loved it as usual, another great poem you created! xxx