Your Dear Lips

Making small talk

under our umbrellas,

our skin crawling

in the cold.

Kissing in the street.

What are we to make of this?

Your dear lips

are a sure way

to paradise. 

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

They sure are. And your poem is relatable and saucy in a sensational way wow. Kudos!

Plz do review/comment on my newest poem too titled llamas...., it's the way to say hi to each other.

[BlackPrince]

I love the seeemingly simplistic yet underlying deep and touching use of words to depict such a relevant and universal element of love and togetherness. This is a short and sweet poem of appreciation of love, an ode to 'lips', which are love's most symbolic attributes;
for when two souls lock lips in consent and reciprocity, there's no greener light, there's no surer sign of love and acceptance.

'Your dear lips
are a sure way
to Paradise'.
Is there any better way to describe the bliss of kissing? Wonderful!

Can you please do me the honour of reviewing my work in constructive honesty?

WELL DONE

[Paul Bell]

If it keeps you warm it should be compulsory.
Probably some sad law against it mind you.
But I like it.

[jen]

lovely, inviting and familiar.... well done

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. We never forget the kind and sweet kisses. A wonderful poem dear friend.
Coyote