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Everyone wondered why we were still together.

Still holding on

When the war between us, raged.

And so you decide to leave me in the dust

Because it's too much to handle.

All I wanted was your respect

And your heart.

I gave you mine,

Why do you hesitate to give me yours?

I was done fighting.

Done with being accused of false things.

But I still held on.

Hoping things would get better.

I thought we would work through it,

But you decided to break me.

Everyone thought we were fine,

But no one knew what we knew.

Reviews

[Holly O'Brien]

You are really getting better. I can see you opening up more to sharing yourself---or I could just be thinking this way. In any case, I loved the sorted emotions. I also enjoyed the honesty and frankness. Keep it up!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was another great write..men don't always know what they want because they think they know...I loved the emotions within the piece. I love the two ending lines. The whole piece worked together. Thanks for sharing.