Little Girl

A poem I just wrote. A character poem.

Little girl,

Locked up inside,

Fighting to escape.

Trapped within her own body,

Hating her own face.

Little girl,

Manipulated,

Twisted beyond belief.

Can you see her crying now,

Can you hear her scream.

Little girl,

Fight for your life,

Struggle against yourself.

When will you lose it all?

How long can you last?

Little girl, we’ve lost you now,

Cant’ find you anywhere.

Little girl, murderer,

Can’t control yourself.

Little girl,

Little girl,

Time to wake up now.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think! I love writing character poems, but I want to know if my point is getting across.

Reviews

[Catherine Frain]

Emmmmmmaaaaaaaaalllleeeeeiiiigggghhhh

This is (probably) a type of poem that I'd be likely to write xD. Ohhhh but no this is amazing.

(((What charie is tis for?)))

[EmaleighLynn]

Um. A character in a fanfiction I'm writing.

I'm glad you like my poem!!

Miss you girl.

[Pryde Foltz]

Little girl, murderer,
Can’t control yourself.

Little girl,
Little girl,
Time to wake up now.

A chilling write, Emaleigh.

[EmaleighLynn]

Thank you! As I was writing this I heard it like a song in my head, like one of those creepy songs children in horror movies sing. I'm so glad you thought it was "chilling", that's exactly what I was going for.

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I think that this is an amazing character poem and it definitely tells us a story. Great, no, excellent job.

"Trapped within her own body,
Hating her own face"

^That really got to me.

[EmaleighLynn]

Thank you much! I'm glad you felt like it told a story.

That line is a favorite of mine. I'm glad it resonated with you.

I've realized that I say "I'm glad..." a lot.