Azure Arctic

Azure Arctic

A Book by Ember Quinn
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A story about some kids living in a world full of kings, demons, and magic.

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© 2017 Ember Quinn



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Ember Quinn
Still a work in progress

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A very interesting story so far. I like the setting a lot, what little has been revealed so far anyways. It's generally well written, although there are a few instances where I feel that you could do with a bit more show-don't-tell. For instance, when you're explaining what Partial Demons are or about the Demon Dogs, I feel that the flow of the chapter might be better if you gradually let us know details over the course of the writing instead of dumping the explanation in one paragraph. Overall, I'm eager to read more.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ember Quinn

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story ^-^ I'll keep in mind the whole show-don't-tell idea as.. read more



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A very interesting story so far. I like the setting a lot, what little has been revealed so far anyways. It's generally well written, although there are a few instances where I feel that you could do with a bit more show-don't-tell. For instance, when you're explaining what Partial Demons are or about the Demon Dogs, I feel that the flow of the chapter might be better if you gradually let us know details over the course of the writing instead of dumping the explanation in one paragraph. Overall, I'm eager to read more.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ember Quinn

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story ^-^ I'll keep in mind the whole show-don't-tell idea as.. read more

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