Sleep in Peace, Rest in Slumber

Sleep in Peace, Rest in Slumber

A Poem by Yani De Los Reyes
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It's basically something about sleep and calmness. I can keep it true. Don't trust in me, but just see it in its invisible state so that you can believe in it.

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Hush now my dear
Don't cry, don't weep
Rest thy head
Close thy eyes

Let the calmness of night
Take you to peace
Rest forever inside
Never wake from this sleep

Forget all the pain and anxiety
Ignore Life's harsh desires
Give time for thyself
Give nothing thy mind

Thee who suffered from hell
When the sun will set,
And night will rise,
Thy mind will stay in Heaven

Let the clouds take wing
Let it soar to the skies
And let it stay there
Until you're ready to go 

Please, try to forget that confusion
If not, stay in thy calmest state
Be calm, meditate, think nothing
And everything will be normal again

© 2010 Yani De Los Reyes



Author's Note

Yani De Los Reyes
Don't trust in me, but just see it in its invisible state so that you can believe in it.

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This is a rather calming problem. Although, I do not agree about thee "think nothing" phrase since each and everyone of us has problems and they pile up the space in our mind and this makes me forget all the minor problems but this can be good though. Meditating so that you can calm yourself. This poem has a little bit of a flaw in the third stanza at the last line. Try to change that but anyways, this is a really good poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about calmness.

-General

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this. Especially these lines:

"Let the clouds take wing
Let it soar to the skies
And let it stay there
Until you're ready to go "

Posted 7 Years Ago


Well I am not into formal writing when it comes to giving out my comments but uhm, this made me shed tears and I have no idea why... Such a great writer, the new generation just makes me smile! ^_^ Keep it up and keep on expressing yourself! :) I loved it, just from reading it, I felt like i am hearing a musical lullaby... Marvelous! ^_^

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like your words. They were like meditation. Easy and peaceful to grasp and understand. A excellent poem.
Coyote



Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on February 16, 2010
Last Updated on February 20, 2010
Tags: peace, darkness, sleep

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Yani De Los Reyes
Yani De Los Reyes

Quezon City, National Capital Region, Philippines



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I'm a 12 year old girl turning 13 after 3 more months. I'm a person just like you. Ordinary yet special in the eyes of the Creator. Making Art is my passion and writing is one of my most favorites. An.. more..

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