Confessions of a Little Chick

I find this one to be cute. ^__^

Flowers that bloom in spring

Oh, summer wind that fills the sky

Birds that soar and take wing

Please take me with you, let me fly!

Even though a lot of people want to fly

They are always tricked by gravity

But the truth is, everyone can fly!

There's that little bike

That you forget to put away

Let's clean up it and ride it again

One more time! 

Let your heart take you everywhere

Don't forget to smile too

Because happy thoughts make you fly

Frowns make you fall 

When I say 'thank you' to you

and you smile, 'thank you'

Then I'll enjoy going place by place

That's when I'll really love you

Take me with you! Let me fly!

Little I am, but I have big dreams

I want them to be reached

By this bright yellow wings!

Don't worry, you're not alone

I, too, have curiosity in me

It's a bit strange

I'm still crying even though I'm happy

But it doesn't matter anymore

It's a really big world out there

And I want to explore it!

Nothing can stand in my way!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Legendary]

This is a nice poem. It kinda soothed my mood actually, I was feeling quite down lately and when I read this, I was absolutely inspired. :) This is a simple yet inspirational poem but it's sort of confusing in some stanzas but it didn't matter. The chick represents that size does not matter at all as long as you had the ability to do what's good and what's right. This is indeed a good job. I have nothing to critique. Job well done.

[Abhinav]

awesome write again:)))
cheers!

Abby