Goodnight

I have always been fascinated by stars. And I have always been mad about love.

Will thou love me when the nights grow dark,
With no constellations to guide our way?

Will thou love me when the stars all fall?
Sit back, and hold my hand,
And stay up to count them all?

I will make a wish
On all that catch my eye
That thou will stay and love me
As we watch the falling sky.

And if my wish be granted,
What a fantastic final sight.
I will count the falling stars,
And kiss you a hundred times
Goodnight.

Reviews

[brebabi]

the poem flows really nicely....

[Emily Feret]

Thanks for reading

[brebabi]

your welcome

[Pax]

incredibly sweet ~ the emotions flows smoothly. i enjoyed this!

[Emily Feret]

Thank you pax!!

[Rita L. Sev]

A beautiful, flowing love song, with the perfect imagery of the stars.

[Emily Feret]

Oh my goodness. thank you so much!

[Dean]

The object of this poem should consider himself fortunate, indeed!

[Emily Feret]

Aww, what a sweet thing to say! Thank you so so much Dean!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Had the feel of the master's of poetry. Good to allow the stars and the sky to make us find peace and joy. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily Feret]

wow, thank you so so much for your kind words, and I appreciate you taking to time to read and review one of my poems!!

[beautiful dreamer]

i love the usage of old english in the first stanza! thats so awesome! love this!

[Emily Feret]

Thank you so much for reading!!

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome!

[Rachel Anderson]

The third stanza is definitely my favorite. Excellent job!

[Emily Feret]

thank you so much for reading!

[WILLIAMSJI MAVELI]

This is another simple love verse. It is just nice. Congrats.
Keep writing..
Regards
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[Emily Feret]

thank you so much for reading :)

[Kelsey O'Connell]

this is beautiful and heartwarming :)
i especially enjoyed the last stanza!
i shall continue to read your work!

kelsey

[Emily Feret]

Thank you so so much for taking to time to read what I wrote! I will def take the time to return the favor!

[Tigerloose]

The thought of all the stars falling is a little alarming. But i suppose if the firmament should collapse, giving one's love a hundred final kisses would be an acceptable endeavour.
i enjoyed your poem!

[Emily Feret]

Thank you!!!