Goodnight

Goodnight

A Poem by Emily Feret
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I have always been fascinated by stars. And I have always been mad about love.

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Will thou love me when the nights grow dark,
With no constellations to guide our way?

Will thou love me when the stars all fall?
Sit back, and hold my hand,
And stay up to count them all?

I will make a wish
On all that catch my eye
That thou will stay and love me
As we watch the falling sky.

And if my wish be granted,
What a fantastic final sight.
I will count the falling stars,
And kiss you a hundred times
Goodnight.


© 2013 Emily Feret



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the poem flows really nicely....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading
brebabi

4 Years Ago

your welcome
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Pax
incredibly sweet ~ the emotions flows smoothly. i enjoyed this!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

Thank you pax!!
A beautiful, flowing love song, with the perfect imagery of the stars.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

Oh my goodness. thank you so much!
The object of this poem should consider himself fortunate, indeed!


Posted 4 Years Ago


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Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

Aww, what a sweet thing to say! Thank you so so much Dean!
A beautiful poem. Had the feel of the master's of poetry. Good to allow the stars and the sky to make us find peace and joy. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

wow, thank you so so much for your kind words, and I appreciate you taking to time to read and revie.. read more
i love the usage of old english in the first stanza! thats so awesome! love this!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading!!
beautiful dreamer

4 Years Ago

welcome!
The third stanza is definitely my favorite. Excellent job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading!
This is another simple love verse. It is just nice. Congrats.
Keep writing..
Regards
williamsji@yahoo.com

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading :)
this is beautiful and heartwarming :)
i especially enjoyed the last stanza!
i shall continue to read your work!

kelsey

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

Thank you so so much for taking to time to read what I wrote! I will def take the time to return the.. read more
The thought of all the stars falling is a little alarming. But i suppose if the firmament should collapse, giving one's love a hundred final kisses would be an acceptable endeavour.
i enjoyed your poem!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

4 Years Ago

Thank you!!!

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