Little Paper Ducks

Focus on the simple things, focus on those little paper ducks.

A paper duck, origami, decorating the window sill

Light reflecting off a baby blue duck

A river of thoughts stream through my head, all the things I could have said

Must concentrate on these beautiful little paper ducks, what’s done is done

May these simple folds of paper, remind me that everything is cool when you breathe

Accept myself for what is done, love myself for adventures to come

Author's Note

A poem I wrote with 8 random words my friend gave me.

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
i would never have guessed that.....this is so condensed and homogeneous........
acceptance of self could instantly turn you into superhuman......
beautiful work....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Emily]

Thank you so much, and thanks for telling me what it was that you liked about it. I really appreciate it.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are very welcome..........!!! :) :)

[Kunda]

Nice poem, wonder what you did though..oh wait, no, must concentrate on the paper ducks! :)

[Emily]

Thanks for your comment.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Cute, i mean, who doesn't like ducks? Or origami? Or windowseals for that matter? Well played with the list of words given. Cute!

[Emily]

Thank you very much (:

[jdtunafish3175]

Nice little simple poem :) I like it!

[Emily]

Thanks for your comment (:

[Jess Armstrong]

I really like it. Random words are fun to work with, because you never know what you can make with them. Sometimes those kinds of poems are better than the ones you carefully plan out.

[Emily]

Thanks. Yes, it is a fun way to write with random words sometimes, and I find it really works your creativity..challenging

[Chris]

Sometimes when you write to a challenge it is appropos to include the word list...

Responding to challenges seems to take an author's choice away ...but it's fun when you feel directionless and are just passing time and whim.