On My Mind

On My Mind

A Poem by Emily

Craving seven

Days with you

Body longing to spasm

As I snuggle next to you

Voice a phantom in my mind

Yearning to hear you in real time

Wild as a moose,

sweet as an apricot

Saying you’re clairvoyant-

Believing you,

When you say-

We’re destined to meet

That moment we-

exchanged digits,

No longer wanted you

A mere phantom-

of my mind

Knew I wanted more,

More of you in my life

Fantasies always-

Lingering on my mind

You mangle my worries

Crushing them with ease

Please be the one-

Who’s more than-

just my favorite tease

Zero bitterness when thinking of you

My makeup not frumpy-

As I take a picture for you

Like milk curdling with lemon-

it does not blend well

When conversing-

we’re attracted like magnets,

connected like glue

Craving seven days

Surrounded by you

© 2017 Emily

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You did a great job with the ten words. Lots of romance in this one. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 Months Ago

Thanks for your review :)
An articulated poem indeed. Great work!

Posted 4 Months Ago


4 Months Ago

thank you (:
This is so beautiful ,I was really touched how your words ran across my mind..keep writing dear,
This same rhytime, just wonderful
Lovely write

Posted 7 Months Ago


7 Months Ago

Thank you (:

7 Months Ago

You are very welcome..
Hi Emily, thank you for participating in the 10 Words I Give contest. I enjoyed this romantic poem; sweetly lustful. "Like milk curdling with lemon" gives way to all action, no talk! Nothing wrong with that. Who needs talk when two lovers can create poetry with body language. A fun-filled seven days to dream about.

Posted 7 Months Ago


7 Months Ago

Thank you for your feedback on my poem. I truly appreciate it (:

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Added on April 23, 2017
Last Updated on April 23, 2017
Tags: poetry, love



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