She walks with beauty

The heavy oak door opens, all heads turn.

Gasping, exclaiming shocked whispers,

They say she’s never looked more beautiful.

Down by the alter, he waits for her,

With a smile on his face, as if he knows a secret.

To them she is beautiful,

To them she is stunning for the first time,

But he knows what they don’t; he sees what they can’t,

To him she radiates beauty, every day.

Her smile makes him smile,

Her laugh makes him laugh,

Today is no different, today nothing has changed,

Today she simply shows off her beauty,

To everyone, rather than just him.

Her eyes wet with happiness,

She smiles at him, that familiar smile he knows so well,

As she makes her way to him,

She walks with beauty.

Reviews

[Tai]

This is a wonderful poem, that surely must be a sign that they're in love. When you can look past the physical aspects and realize the true beauty of the soul of your significant other. I really loved the topic and the message it kind of gives me. It just annoys me how society as it is today looks to such physical beauty when it truly lies within. Wonderful Job, Em! Keep it up!

[TKBickel]

Such a stunning well written poem from a poet that knows what she’s doing.
I can imagine you, the writer, sitting at the wedding and being inspired by watching the silent communication between the groom and bride.

[Katelyn]

Beautiful poem! 100/100

[Ragin Cajun]

you could feel the love the two have for each other. Very well done

[emrick]

I like the theme in this poem.
nice thinking.

[fireblossom]

Lovely Em. Really sweet and dear.

[Luciole]

this very cute! so much love!! really nicely done! :D

[William Sinclair]

This is brilliantly romantic. Congratulations, this poem is a thing of true beauty.

[Archia]

Oh this is just a wondeful poem. The way you described it is just do beautiful and the whole idea of it is great.

[Mauricio Montoya]

...............and everyhting just fits........nice work.