Confusion...

Heart beats deep within me,

I stare at you, watching waiting,

Waiting for you to see me,

Waiting for you to know I'm here.

All those times,

Late nights, movies,

The hugs, the kisses,

Do I mean nothing to you any more?

The only one I see is you,

The only one I want is you,

So why is this so hard?

Are you embarrassed to have me around?

The time you spent away,

Did something happen with that girl?

The girl who seems to hate me?

Be honest, please, I miss you.

I miss the one who made me smile,

The one who made me laugh,

The one who made me feel so beautiful.

Where are you when I need you the most?

I love you,

There I said it,

Just like you used to say it to me.

Don't you remember those times??

The making out on the couch,

The want for so much more...

Don't you see me any more?

When you hug me tight,

I feel the old you.

When we are apart, its like I don't exist to you at all.

Please, just be honest...

Do you still want me?

Do you still love me?

Please do....

Reviews

[TKBickel]

I love the visual layout of the words.
You did a good job using words to bring out the feeling of variability and a touch of loss.

[Luciole]

I can't say why I loved this so much, seeing as it would take me forever to write :) I LOVED this. Just, awesome.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Exellent. Very well done, I can really feel what you're feeling. Great job!

[Ragin Cajun]

Very well done!!!

[Dez H.]

Miss lady you never cease to amaze me with the things you write. You have so much emotion in you that I can tell when you write your heart beats three times faster than normal. Like always you r the s**t and i always enjoy reading your works.

[Katarzyna Slade]

very sweet emotional write ... i enjoyed very much :)

[Tai Ryens]

This is honestly just overflowing with such strong emotions that would break a human soul in half. This was a really amazing write; it explains perfectly how it feels to miss someone you love.
Amazing job, keep it up!

[The Shadow of the Dawn]

i almost cried :'( great write love the feeling and emotion