Wonderful Winter

Wonderful Winter

A Poem by Wonderland Asylum

It's the time for Cold Floors,

Break out the Fuzzy Socks.

Bring in some Chopped wood,

from Outside.

Sit by the fire, nice and toasty now.

BUT wait!

It can get even better.

A nice warm mug of apple cider, or hot chocolate.

No matter how much others complains about this weather,

it fits me perfectly.

BItter air outside.  Making breathing hurt a little.

Such a wonderful sting, And the Numbness too!

Dark, cloudy, gloomy days are the best, and is when I’m happiest.

Its like nature is showing the world,

what’s inside my head.

During fall and winter, no

New marks

appear.

Why would I need to make more?

I’m already experiencing the comforting sting of the cold,

And the easing pain from breathing

this wonderfully bitter air.

© 2017 Wonderland Asylum


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i love this. i so so...is it satirism or sarcasm or oxymoron. the style, yet brings home the melancholic point; "dark, cloudy days are the best and it's when i'm happiest". yet you managed to create a positive

Again you said "comfort sting of the cold", "wonderfully bitter". lovely expressions.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderland Asylum

6 Years Ago

Thank-you so much!



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Winter is here. 6 inches here in Detroit. I like the pace of Winter. Seem slower. I enjoyed your description. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish my winter was like that. I dont have a fireplace and ive never tried hot apple cider before

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Wonderland Asylum

6 Years Ago

Jay i will bring you some apple cider tmmro if i can get it

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Wonderland Asylum
Wonderland Asylum

Reedley, CA



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Alternative, shy, loves music. I typically keep to myself, and am not very expressive. But when I write, it's like I'm some place else. I've been gone for a while, and I'm working on getting back.. more..

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