Love

Love

A Story by Emo_Cat

 All I ever felt was hate i never wanted too but it seemed as though
 i was just destined to not love at all but i felt something i think it was 
 love, i hope it was love i never knew i would feel butterflies or the way you 
 feel when love is in your way, i hope the way he looks at me will stay the same forever 
 i want him to stay here, with me..


© 2018 Emo_Cat



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I really enjoyed this poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your pieces. I'm kind of new on here and it would be an honor if you can review my 4 new recent poems. (The world is ours, Nostalgia, Paradise, and You)

Thank you and Keep up the Good work!

Posted 7 Months Ago


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You did a great job with this emotionally expressed piece. Keep up the good work!!!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A positive ending to the story. For love to stay. Two people must bent and flex. Become one in life and in love. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes love has that strange affect doesn’t it but what’s meant to be will find you always.. true love cannot be begged or borrowed it must just be- lovely words🌹

Posted 7 Months Ago


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I really enjoyed this poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your pieces. I'm kind of new on here and it would be an honor if you can review my 4 new recent poems. (The world is ours, Nostalgia, Paradise, and You)

Thank you and Keep up the Good work!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful way of describing love. Great job.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm right here alongside you, feeling it too. Except I'm finally beyond the hopefulness that follows your beginning words of desolation. I banished hopefulness & it helps make the disappointments less poignant. I love the way you make the journey seem brief, but we all know what a long bumpy ride it is between your first sentiments & your last (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful write, nicely done

Posted 8 Months Ago


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It's simple, in a way that is universally felt by anyone who thought they were in love, at least once in their lives. I mean, s**t, I'm in love rn and I totally understood this. Well done!!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

(wipes away tears) Absolutely beautiful, dear. :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is hard to explain but when you’re in it, you know it! Nice write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Emo_Cat
Emo_Cat

Reedley, CA



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emo, shy, loves music. I typically keep to myself, and am not very expressive. But when I write, it's like I'm some place else. "Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot, who calls .. more..

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