My Question

My Question

A Poem by Emo_Cat

do you still love me
do you still love m
do you still love
do you still lov
do you still lo
do you still l
do you still 
do you stil
do you sti
do you st
do you s
do you
do yo
do y
do
d
di
did
did y
did yo
did you
did you e
did you ev
did you eve
did you ever
did you ever l
did you ever lo
did you ever lov
did you ever love
did you ever love m
did you ever love me


© 2018 Emo_Cat



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This is really good imagery poetry. Not only do your words show the waning of a feeling and the building of a realization, but the structure of the poem does, as well. It shows the movement of the change in emotions, and how the person builds on her change of thought, how one idea proves a misconception little by little, and the person gains strength in her affirmation through strengthening her truth. We see her weakness and strength through the imagery.

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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a story all by itself - as so many really are...

and have a happy and grand 18 th!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now there's the ultimate question.
But is there an answer.
I suppose the answer's in the emotion of the poem.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not easy to write a shape poem. This one is full of emotions constantly changing. Unique. Lydi**

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good imagery poetry. Not only do your words show the waning of a feeling and the building of a realization, but the structure of the poem does, as well. It shows the movement of the change in emotions, and how the person builds on her change of thought, how one idea proves a misconception little by little, and the person gains strength in her affirmation through strengthening her truth. We see her weakness and strength through the imagery.

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Amy
I love your poem! Even though you only wrote "do you still love me" and "did you ever love me," it still felt like it held so much meaning. I especially love the set up of the poem. I've never seen a poem set up like that!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmm! clever? interesting? Loves me/ Loves me not? Simple? Complicated? Good? Bad? I don't know circle one for me?

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aesthetically pleasing. It does instigate a little self reflection... but only for a moment. And then I started laughing as I thought of Shia Labouf and his dumb assed "he will not divide us" thing. Ha...anyway. Seriously...put more effort into what you write. I read this out loud to my cat and he got pretty pissed off at the simplicity of it all. dawg. (it wasn't that bad)

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David of the Demers

4 Months Ago

It really was fun to read. (if I don't include an insult in my review people get disappointed).
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Emo_Cat

4 Months Ago

its fine, as long as your insults in reviews on my writing don't involve and cuss words, i'm fine wi.. read more
David of the Demers

4 Months Ago

Really? Swear words are the tipping point? Would you like to know why I think that is absurd?

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Emo_Cat

Reedley, CA



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emo, shy, loves music. I typically keep to myself, and am not very expressive. But when I write, it's like I'm some place else. "Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot, who calls .. more..

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