Laughter

theres many types of laughter in this world.

when i'm with my friends its all good.

we make jokes.

we're all close to crying.

boy that was funny.

 

or theres the laughter when i'm not with them.

when other people laugh and stare.

this laughter hurts deeply.

laughing at my style.

or laughing becouse i'm not as skinny as i should be.

not tall enough.

not pretty enough.

not preppy enough.

not perfect enough,,,,,,

this type of laughter can also bring me many tears.

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!!
I Liked How You Portrayed Two Different Sides To Laughter ... Interesting

"theres many types of laughter in this world.
when i'm with my friends its all good."

Wonderfully Written !!!

"or theres the laughter when i'm not with them.
when other people laugh and stare.
this laughter hurts deeply."

Yet So Sad !!!

You Did A Awesome Job With The Poem !!!
Keep It Up !!!

[Starting Over]

Yeah i agree with xXxherHeartXxX it is a great write of showing two sides of laughter and that some cut deeper then others! But dont let those people get to ya they just need to feel power!

[Vincent A. Beasley]

Oh man x0 I was all happy and felling the laughter and the good times. But then... BAM! I was all sad and stuff x0 You did very well at making that final impact unexpected. Very good =]

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You did a wonderful job of decribing the two different laughters...and this is so true...when you are with friends you can enjoy and make jokes and fool around...but with others they see what is out side and not the inside of the person...i find that looks dont matter...and everyone is unique...they have their own styles and personality and everything...ppl need to look what is really important...what is inside the persons heart...for i think the reason ppl act the way they do...is for they might be hurting on the inside...and ppl just dont understand it unless they put themselves in the others shoes...or even go through what the other is going through...then maybe their eyes would be opened to see what really matters.
Great Job :)

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Oh yeah, when you laugh with friends you feel so on your own and don't care about the world

But when others laugh at you, MOCK at you, that's really hurtful!!!

Nice write!