single fly

definr may two place apart. as they are fine shell they be with single fly as past thoug as forsang the past watch has been define with the gods

Author's Note

how we feel like we lead for are past that we thing we have fond just a single fly what mean with a single prson can chear ur life to fall back to what u want know at one time

Reviews

[The 13th Eros]

Your thoughts take us on a journey of wonder; wandering through what it is that fills our days. One person, yes... one person can make you come alive.

[Chaos_Collector]

I believe "definr" = define. thoug = though? This poem could use a few commas and periods, so I know where to stop and continue. I think you have a good message going here though.

[poems with feeling]

thanks u

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome :)

Chaos_Collector

[poems with feeling]

lol that one old i don ever know what it mean anymore

[Chaos_Collector]

Haha I have a piece or two like that. Those pieces seem impossible to bring up to date and make better because you don't remember the meaning of em

[poems with feeling]

i dont nwith a lot of my stuff in lest the more me in some way

[Chaos_Collector]

Lol you gotta try and write more meaningful stuff then from the heart

[poems with feeling]

that is what all my stuff is from heart or the some some thing i feel

[Chaos_Collector]

Have you ever written a poem from a while back that you remember the meaning of even now?

[poems with feeling]

yes i have

[Chaos_Collector]

That's good. Gotta have the memorable pieces.

[poems with feeling]

yes it the one call shhh dont tell a soul

[Chaos_Collector]

Cool. I'll give it a read now

[poems with feeling]

good

[Arsh]

hey.....it's cool,but u should have to write about ie somthing more...