"Not a moment to waste"

i wrote this for my love

Glaring into your eyes of love
I wait for a moment for a sweet tender kiss
One to roll my heart above
For words I shall not miss

My eyes hurt from tears I cry
From every waking aching moment
Your love shows me to try
There's no time to waste for a moment

You kiss me so sweetly
Hold me with your love so tight
Never let go until you love sweetly
I shall hold you with all my might

There's never a moment to waste
With you I can't copy and paste

Reviews

[Chris]

Sorting the immediacy of emotions is hard for everyone... but as you live you do learn...

[Peninsula Pariah]

Very nice. I wish someone wrote this lovely about me :)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful rhyming poem. Thank you for sharing...:).................

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

you are welcome :D thank you for your comment

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome too...:)....................