Beneath Skies

Under blue skies
she's lost in his
blue eyes.

They worship each
other under the
warm sun.

Day turns to night
lust to love. Under
starry skies,

they became one.

Her fingers twirl his
rusty hair as his eyes
discover her soul.

Loneliness escapes them,
Passion invades them,
they can finally let go.

Essence to essence,
heart to heart, magic
bloomed beneath skies.

Soul mates found never to part.

© JB 2008

© 2010 Jennifer L. Brooks

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Eleanor Jazz

I love this line very much : They worship each other under the warm sun. It somehow feels pure with this line/ stanza in this poem. Nice :) now I want to go hug someone after reading this :P

Posted 3 Years Ago

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Alex W

I'm not a fan of pieces about love so this isn't my thing, but it's very well written and flows well :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago

Katie L

well done, keep writing

Posted 3 Years Ago

Frantzou

very pationatly written, well done. :D

Posted 3 Years Ago

Angie Diane♥&hea..

I like this poem. Thanks for sharing it. :D

Posted 3 Years Ago

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Added on August 22, 2009
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Jennifer L. Brooks

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