If I were wind

If I were wind,
gentle and tranquil
I'd touch your face with me,
your every breath I’d be
so exhale very slow
that I may go
moments
at
a
time

Reviews

[Southern Cross]

So soft and yet so strong ..Loved this

[Treble]

This is a beautiful work of art. I love it. I love how it has a double meaning to it. The poem is beautiful.

[BLBrown]

Lovely. I think this may be the first time I've reviewed your writing. Congrats on the contest win.

I love the brevity of this piece, which is carefully crafted. My favorite phrases are, "I'd touch your face with me, your every breath I’d be"

Astoundingly beautiful and I wouldn't change a thing!

[EmpressPoetess]

Thank you, BLBrown, for this wonderful, warm review! Glad you liked it!