Quiet the coming storm

Saving a great relationship

 

I don’t want to see this anymore
I don’t want to see you staring out the window
if your heart is with me in this romance
don't close us out before we open the next door

I don’t want to do this anymore
Blaming and arguing over who’s fault it is
That there’s no music in your head
And the silence is too loud for you to bear

Let it flow, listen to my heart, let this love grow
Don’t drag my heart around on a string
Cause I won’t bear that kind of pain from you
Touch me again with gentle loving hands

Don’t yell that you don’t have time for me
Just pull me into your tender embrace
I don’t want to wake up without you
I’ll give you soft, sweet melodies of love

And whisper away the silence for you
Let my lips quiet the storming in you
And my hands caress away the burning
I'm your umbrella in the rain

And your cool drink when you feel the heat
Let us love again, baby, let us kiss sweetly
Take my hand and sit down, don’t run away
reality is what you make of it, nothing more

What you’re leaving behind is what
You’re running away to look for
It’s here, my dear, it’s always been here
embrace this love and quiet the coming storm

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Don't yell that you don't have time for me
Just pull me into your tender embrace
I don't want to wake up without you
I'll give you soft, sweet melodies of love

Wow the tenderness and love that flows from this piece is really amazing... every stanza in it self is wonderful but together makes one masterpiece.

[deeps]

And whisper away the silence for you
Let my lips quiet the storming in you
And my hands caress away the burning
I'm your umbrella in the rain

I like these lines right here.
i can feel the emotion in this.
This is a beautiful write here.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This is a great emotional piece. Very well penned. Thank you for sharing.

[Greg Skura]

Very nice! i enjoyed the emotion running through this poem, and the unconditional love that is given by you to your mate as you recognise where they are, and where they want to be, and inspite of this you only talk of a loving embrace something to rekindle that which may be lost. Thank You for sharing!

[Tony]

This is very moving and emotional from someone in love, it is gentle and you hold it close to your heart, I get those feelings from your words, you tell it as it is, tryhing to hold on before things get destroyed. I enjoyed this piece.

Tony

[just is]

Don't yell that you don't have time for me
Just pull me into your tender embrace
I don't want to wake up without you
I'll give you soft, sweet melodies of love

I can feel this write, as these words, such a wonderful write here, full of emotion.