Dreams of enchantment

my first attempt at an Auden Tanka

 

I always dreamed of knights and maidens

because of their magical charms.

So when the stars fell, I caught

two handfuls of twinkling stardust.

now I have the gifts of enchantment,

to create my own magic.

Reviews

[Jade_Phenomenal]

CONGRAT'S on the win, Empresspoetess!! You did a great job!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful! Congrats on your winning poem!

[Enthusiast]

Lovely! Well done!

[angelina neves]

wonderful!

[Helena]

Wow, good on you for giving this a go. I just loved it! Sweet and magical....well done
Empress!

Thank you for submitting this beauty to Sal's Auden Tanka Contest! ~ Helena

[DanaRegen]

EmpressPoetess,
This is a specktacular and magical poem. I think youve mastered writing Auden Tanka's, I love the magical feeling and the refreshing feeling in this poem. This poem truly is a dream of enchantment! Great job!
-Dana :)