A lullaby of love

 

Like an enchanting song of mystery.

Our passion is blending our melody

Into a soft, sweet lyrical lullaby

Filled with fiery love and passion

So intense it sometimes makes me cry.

So by all means, let your love rain,

Down on me, into my loving heart

All that you give, my heart will contain

Two souls blended, never to part.

Our love clears up life’s mystery,

Of how two souls become one part,

Of this universal blended lullaby

Song by all who dare to seek passion,

And take a walk in love’s gentle rain.

 

Reviews

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is really nicely blended together. i like the flow of this piece and i really like the wording

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your first place win. Great Job

[Frances O'Neill]

Nicely blended words!

[deeps]

Our love clears up life's mystery,
Of how two souls become one part,
Of this universal blended lullaby
Song by all who dare to seek passion,
And take a walk in love's gentle rain.


Oh! Wow! I love these lines here.
I enjoyed this write muchly.
I can feel this write in my bones.

[Jimmy Greenie]

Really nice. "Let your love rain down". Good idea. Beautiful!

[Matthew Green]

Wow, great poem. I like the idea of love being a song sung by everyone who feels it (universal, as you said.)
Good luck in the competition :)

[Poeticpiers]

Gentle and delkcate song of love I applaud loudly

[Helena]

Oh wow, just applauding here! This is the most beautiful
love poem I have read for a while. Passionate and sweet,
a real "lullaby of love", if ever there was! ~ Helena