The Final End

This is the end, my friend.

Sighing,

Breathing,

Leaving,

Walk out the door,

Walk out of my life,

You don't need me anymore.

Crying, 

Yelling,

We shouldn't last this way.

Sitting, 

Thinking,

I admit that I missed you,

I honestly loved you.

Mistakes,

Regrets,

How did we come to this?

Letting go,

Saying goodbye,

I didn't want it to end.

Smiles and laughter I remember,

But fights made it all fall apart.

I kept hoping. And you kept changing. 

I left. You shrugged.

You left. I cried.

I came back. You smiled.

You came back. I got hurt.

We tried. We failed.

So how did it work?

How is it that we're still here?

The way we are,

So distant,

And so far,

But really near,

And so close.

We chose to stay away,

But stay close,

..I won't try anything.

I lived. You died.

You lived. I died.

So I sit here in silence,

..Sighing,

..Breathing,

I'm walking out.

I'm giving up.

..I really do love you.

So walk out the door,

..I don't need you anymore.

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I like the single thoughts before the realizing lines in the first couple of stanzas. Very well portrayed of an ending of a love. I can relate and it is never an easy thing.

[Simon Welsh]

Defiant as always. Nicely written.

[dakarai]

WOW! I loved this! I loved the flow that was controlled by the form of this poem. The change of emotions rejected like the changing of seasons. As I was reading I felt like I was seeing everything you were describing in short flash backs. If that makes sense. Great job.

[Emily]

I just put it as one of my favorites! Keep it up!

[Chloe_Spence]

Jessica!
You've done it again- written another amazing poem!

I can relate to this at the moment.... and its poems like this that make me feel less lonely. I have to admit, through the emotive language of this poem, you have made me feel comforted :) This is going in my favorites!

Well done on the poem Jessica! Keep writing- you have a very special and unique style of writing! :)

[Stevo The POE-t]

Wow, just wow... I'm not sure how to review this? A powerful write girl

[Antoñyo]

Another accurate and powerful piece written in the pure of the moment!
I'm so glad that not all of us get wrapped up in how to write...and just write!

Keep it coming, thanks!