Excuse Me..

Excuse Me..

A Poem by Jessica Ramirez

I just want to take a moment & Make an apology to all.

To all that have encountered
To all that have met
To all that got to know
To all that became a friend
To all that cared

Just let me apologize.



Apologize for a rather late apology.



Negative
Sad
A pathological liar


I apologize.



I apologize to all.


Reverse the encounters
Reverse the meetings
Reverse the knowing
Reverse the friendships
Reverse the care


I wish I could.



I would.



But I cannot....I'm sorry.






© 2014 Jessica Ramirez



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I think we can all relate to this in parts.Nicely done

Posted 2 Years Ago


I loved the honesty and raw emotion here! Truly amazing job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Impressive poem! The structure is interesting, different, but yet still magically works. questions still hang in the air, and the feelings pour out. Nicely done xxx

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like the structure of your poem. They all are different yet so alike. This is something I can never write. I love it. Great work. x

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jes you speak the truth keep on

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like how you structured this poem... it came across as different thoughts at different intervals yet they all tied in together so it worked.

Nicely done :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


this is awesome. I understand his feeling perfectly, and you really nailed it. There is so much emotion and so many unasked questions surrounding this poem, and you have written it really well. I am impressed! Keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jess you have crafted this poem so well, brilliant.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Such a great write! I really like the style and flow! Great Job Jess :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


It's deep and full of emotions.
Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Jessica Ramirez
Jessica Ramirez

Houston, TX



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