Simple Love

I wrote this for a special guy in my life.

I love your laugh.

The way it sounds like a smooth harmony.

I love your smile.

The way it brightens my world instantly.

I love your voice.

The way it makes everything perfect.

I love your heart.

The way it reaches out for mine.

I love your arms.

The way they hold me tight.

Everything feels right when I'm with you.

Reviews

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Wow. Have you shared this with him? He'd really like it, without a doubt! What a sweet poem you've had written here.

[S.C.]

Thank you. I have shared this with him. He thought it was very sweet.

[LL]

Very sweet poem...good job!

[S.C.]

Thank you.

[LL]

Your welcome

[Horizons]

Now here i've interpreted the love with someone who keeps you always happy in his arms and even you too want the same guy who loves you always and keeps you always happy in his arms. I'd be happy much to wish you happy joyous life with someone who really loves you and you love him as well. There's a need now a days of good people, bad evils're surviving in the suite of devils which's further're surviving on the earth in the mask of human. So, i know it's so touch to chose or find out someone from the crowded arena a good one who loves you from the bottom of the heart... who protects you from the others, who keeps you alive always with him, who makes fulfill your all wishes whatever you wish to and so on. It's now a love poem, simply a love an outstanding poem written by you. I enjoyed the write. I felt the piece of love you've peacefully created with the silent voice of totally love. It's here a scent of love you've captured in the poem and made my day good making the poem. Nice flow of ink, beautifully penned. I really enjoyed the poem.
Well done!
May god help you always to chose the right decision of/in your life.

[S.C.]

Thank you Very much. I hope this.love lasts.

[Horizons]

My pleasure! Yeh, May god bless you for that. Love always hurts but it always spreads some love so, right decision of making love's must important so stay away in the fear of getting hurt and i hope you know it already better than me... :) So, I'd wish you stay with yur true love always without hurt anymore but peace of life because everyone needs love to live the life so... take care and may you live your life's every time happily after a worst time now.
Have a wonderful day everyday.

[S.C.]

Thank you for those wise words

[Chaos_Collector]

The detail of this poem is beautiful. The person you wrote this poem is very luck to have you :)

[S.C.]

Thank you very much :) Hopefully he feels lucky to have me or else that would be a bit depressing. Haha.

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome :) Haha yeah I would hope he does. Hope he treats you well

[S.C.]

I'm a bit hard to handle so I can't really blame him for anything that goes wrong. Most of the time I just have way too high of standards that only a fairytale prince can meet. That's the way it is when you are a pathetic romantic.

[Chaos_Collector]

Ouch. Must be hard for him then. Well you two are still together so things must be going well to some degree so that's good :)

[S.C.]

We haven't been together for long. It was one of those where we both liked each other but it never really went anywhere until now. So the feelings have always been there but actually being together is about 3 weeks. Who knows what will happen. But if it does end it'll probably be because he can't handle me and my ongoing fantasies.

[Chaos_Collector]

That'd be real shame if it came to an end so soon. I hope everything works out for the best for you

[S.C.]

I hope so too

[Chaos_Collector]

I think you'll be okay though :)

[S.C.]

Maybe. Who knows. Things are far from perfect.

[Chaos_Collector]

Nothing can ever be truly perfect

[S.C.]

I know. I just hate how he can go a day without talking to me and he doesnt get sad but i do

[Chaos_Collector]

Perhaps he doesn't yearn to talk to you as much as you do on a day to day basis. Idk it's not my place to giving ideas

[S.C.]

Ill stop with this topic

[Chaos_Collector]

Okay then, probably for the best

[S.C.]

Yeah. I dont think you want to hear it. And id rather forget the bad

[Chaos_Collector]

Sounds like a plan

[S.C.]

Hah. Alrighty then.