Oldest Art.

broken hearts, broken hearts

oldest story, oldest art

going along, trying to tell it apart

where'd it start, when's it end

who's gonna fall into it again

break it first

it's not a race, it's not a game

but fun to play, fun to lay

completely open

for just one day

whatcha see, whatcha see

just the world

and you and me

shiny leaves on big green trees

pine needles like real needles like sharp things that cut

enough is enough

but it's never enough

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

Taking the reader on a journey here E.M.
From meeting, to falling in love, to the halcyon 'honeymoon' days to the isolation that was once 'me and you versus the world' and finally to the uncomfortable end (enough is enough) ...and back to the start...

I love 'whatcha see, whatcha see' - there's the playful baby talk that lovers do right there in that line.

Cool write E.M.

[Enigma Monster]

Thanks Tony. An inciteful review, as always :)

[Tony Jordan]

My pleasure as always.
:))

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I can imagine this sing on the street . After happy night. Have wonderful rhytmus and easy to flow. Wonderful message too. Well done.

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Hey good lookin, I like this. It a vicious s****y thing but you'd rather have the pain than nothing. Starz x

[Enigma Monster]

Haha! (blush) Hey Starzy, thanks for reading. And I'd have to agree with you. I'm a sucker for a good love affair!