Broken Home

Every house has its problems. You can fix them, or wit till your home is broken.

Every house has a foundation
Some are built on a rock
And others on the sand

Every house is built to withstand the weather
But when the storms come not every house will stand

Every house has its fair share of problems
Some just keep them in the dark

Every house may seem clean
Some of them just hide their dirt in the closet

Every house is made to seem perfect
But none really are

Every house has its cracks
You can choose to fix them
Or wait until your home is broken

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

Every house has its cracks
You can choose to fix them
Or wait until your home is broken
Great and very thought provoking write, the crucial and most important factor in dealing with issues is projected with most clarity which is what is your take on the issues, deal or simply wait to make issues to go out of control, proud of you to think in those mind streams, thanks for sharing, enjoyed each lines

[Erik Daniel]

Thank you so much!

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, my pleasure

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Yes, everyone has their problems, I think only with God can it all be fixed.

Good Job

[Erik Daniel]

Thank you!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're Welcome

[paul sal.....]

or, hire a carpenter named jesus

[Shaquana Adams]

Wonderfully honest and thought provoking poem :)

[Erik Daniel]

Thank you!

[Demii]

I agree, would be a great metaphor, and good wording, its sweet.

[Erik Daniel]

Thank you!

[Praveeta]

Wonderful write depicting reality. Thanks for sharing.

[Erik Daniel]

Thank you!

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Madison O'Dwyer]

I thought this was a great use of metaphor to eloquently make your point - with a lovely result. Thanks for sharing :)

[Erik Daniel]

Thank you so much!

[Devesh]

Poignant and thought provoking poetry. Great job! :)

[Erik Daniel]

Thanks Devesh!

[A. Amos]

Eric bro deep and magical poetry full with poignant yet truth and honesty, very very very well done. I can proudly say this is one of your best work. Good job and proud of you bro..God bless

[Erik Daniel]

Wow. Thanks so much man!

[David Scott]

True words!
I think we all understand nothing is perfect. Still, we feel like everything should be...
This can also be a trap on your life as well. You can drain away your life constantly "fixing" broken things...
Great good for thought.