'Love', An Illusion

Don't entomb me with this dark illusion

Something they call love

I'll succumb and just be left with a blurred confusion


Pain and sadness will just consume

Leaving me in doom

Scars will form inside my mind

And feelings will unwind


Love is just a pathetic little lie

You'll always say goodbye

Don't tell me of eternal love

'Cause it's something you'll dispose of

Reviews

[bhaskarindia]

the true nature of Love laid threadbare in the poem..but a good piece of writing nonetheless.

[Alyssa C.]

I totally agree with your opinion of "love". Love is just a big fat recipe for heartbreak and sorrow.

[Roryg]

Great poem, just make it a true poem

[EternalDarkness]

Thanks. But what do you mean by 'true poem'?

[Roryg]

Ah I just meant that I think love is not an illusion

[EternalDarkness]

Oh. Well, thanks again. I just found that a bit confusing since I thought there are a lot of different meanings from what you were referring to. Thanks for clearing that up.

[Roryg]

Yea sorry, I really love the poem though

[Carnation]

Intriguing, interesting ... A great poem

[EternalDarkness]

Thank you.

[Deidara]

Interesting

[EternalDarkness]

Thanks.