Find Myself Between the Lines

Find Myself Between the Lines

A Poem by Grey Evanescent

I read to escape reality
go to places I never can
with my own two feet
I read to become my dreams
that I can never fulfill
I read to become the person
I dream to be

But when I write,
I become myself
I find who I truly am
between the lines


© 2017 Grey Evanescent



Author's Note

Grey Evanescent
Found myself pondering on who I truly am

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great insight for a young person. wonderful thoughts. but remember, they also say that "if you can think it, you can do it". keep writing, i liked this.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Grey Evanescent

8 Months Ago

thank you very much! yeah, I'll keep that in mind. :D
i teach writing classes, and what so many students find out is what you express here...their writing reflects their inner selves...they learn about themselves from what they write...

i really like this...

j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Grey Evanescent

8 Months Ago

thank you for your kind review. :) It's nice to know people can relate to my writings! :D
What a profound poem for one so young
Keep it up. Do get out and about though, the world is still a beautiful place .... before they wreck it completely!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Grey Evanescent

8 Months Ago

thanks a lot! yep, the world is beautiful.
I suggest you place 'own' in the first stanza in the line regarding your feet. That way the beat and count in that stanza stays consistent. Its a very nice poem despite that small discrepancy.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Grey Evanescent

8 Months Ago

Thanks! Suggestion appreciated! :D
AshlynnStyx

8 Months Ago

You're welcome. :)
omg i can TOTALLY relate *-* i love reading as well as writing (well... i may like reading a bit more) and yeah it is TRUE

Posted 8 Months Ago


Grey Evanescent

8 Months Ago

Yep! Glad to find someone in the same boat. I appreciate your reviews!
TheLonelyKnight

8 Months Ago

Glad i could help ^~^

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Grey Evanescent
Grey Evanescent

Hilongos, Leyte, Philippines



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Hi! I'm Evanescent Grey! I'm 15 years old I love~ reading and writing (isn't that obvious?)(Stop talking to yourself)(Whatever) I also love math and philosophy. I'm a biiiig fan of anime it has .. more..

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