New Beginning

I pack my bags

And I say goodbye

I know it’s sad

And I know I’ll cry

But I have to do this

I have to go

I need to start new

And I have to go alone

But I won’t lie

I won’t say I’ll be fine

I will cry

But I will survive

And I’ll be happy soon

Because I can see

That there will always be

A new beginning for me

Reviews

[Taino]

Starting anew, so difficult, no many unknowns. We are torn between what we leave behind, yet welcome what might lie before us. "There will always be a new beginning for me", I wish I had said that, hope and perseverance. Very well done!

[Diane]

Very clean and right to the point. Sometimes we has to start over. Bitter sweet.

[Avia]

Wow. This is a simple poem with a strong message. The courage it takes to move on can be so much sometimes. I love this part
But I won't lie
I won't say I'll be fine
I will cry
But I will survive.

The poem flows very nicely too. I love it.

[Evelynn]

Thanks, that means a lot to me

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Dear Evelynn,

This poem has many different meanings to me, and also many other writers and readers out there... It could represent moving to a different state or country, a loved one who has passed away, or a break up that hurts and keeps on coming back to you... no matter what it represents it was incredible and heart felt!
"I need to start new
And I have to go alone
But I won’t lie
I won’t say I’ll be fine"
I loved it!
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry!

Sincerely,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Evelynn]

Thank you so much?

[C. Lee Battaglia]

You're welcome!

[KCthelastboyscout]

Break ups dont happen in one day. It happens over time. But eventually it comes to the moment to say goodbye.this is a loving end to something once wonderful. Thank you for finding the words to share it

[chimetime]

The emotion in this one brings me back to my own low points in my life. I like the simple raw thought in this. Although, I feel you can push the wordplay some way some day.

[Lady Tyke]

I love that there is a sense of hope in this piece. Despite the sadness and maybe sense of loosing something there is also a glimmer of something more to come.

[Vicky]

It's not just poems you're writing, this is also a song. A really good song. I'm really looking your poetry.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhhhh! Thats so relatable

Thankyou for this piece!

[Whirrtere]

I love how bittersweet it is. It shows you tapped into something deep to write this.