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A Poem by Evelynn

I can still see your smile
When I close my eyes
I can still hear your voice
And it gives me butterflies
I still feel your arms
The way they wrapped around me 
I still feel my heart race
As I let myself believe
That we could be more than this
That we could be more than friends
But I know that it won’t happen
And that I won’t get my happy end
I still see your eyes
But they're looking at her
I still see the kiss
Then my world starts to blur 

© 2017 Evelynn

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So intense emotions yet expressed in so simple words..

Posted 4 Months Ago


4 Months Ago

Thank you!
The memories, the longing, hope mixed with reality, the hardships of loving one as you described so beautifully, can send the heart into such a spiral. To see that which you love so much now with another is so full of emotions that I could not do it's description justice but you have. Very well done!

Posted 7 Months Ago


7 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
I really like good to feel the connection and experience with the feelings in my own writing.

Posted 9 Months Ago

A gentle and wonderful journey in your words. You made the reader believe your words and thoughts. I liked the honest tone and strong ending. Thank you Evelynn for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 9 Months Ago

Beautiful. This pulled some heartstrings. Very nice :)

Posted 9 Months Ago

Heart wrenching. I can feel the emotions you wrote. This is seriously very beautifully written. Well done. Simply loved it.

Posted 9 Months Ago

still nice and i love it thanks for sharing the talent you have.

Posted 9 Months Ago

Ah, so emotional. I love the rhythm and rhyming. Not more than a few words wasted.

Posted 9 Months Ago

I really enjoyed reading your poem. You had such great emotion and meaning which you easily tied together with the rest of your poem. Keep up the good work!

Posted 9 Months Ago

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Added on October 30, 2017
Last Updated on November 7, 2017



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