Still

Still

A Poem by Evelynn

I can still see your smile
When I close my eyes
I can still hear your voice
And it gives me butterflies
I still feel your arms
The way they wrapped around me 
I still feel my heart race
As I let myself believe
That we could be more than this
That we could be more than friends
But I know that it won’t happen
And that I won’t get my happy end
I still see your eyes
But they're looking at her
I still see the kiss
Then my world starts to blur 

© 2017 Evelynn



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So intense emotions yet expressed in so simple words..

Posted 6 Months Ago


Evelynn

6 Months Ago

Thank you!
The memories, the longing, hope mixed with reality, the hardships of loving one as you described so beautifully, can send the heart into such a spiral. To see that which you love so much now with another is so full of emotions that I could not do it's description justice but you have. Very well done!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Evelynn

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
I really like this.....so good to feel the connection and experience with the feelings in my own life....top writing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


A gentle and wonderful journey in your words. You made the reader believe your words and thoughts. I liked the honest tone and strong ending. Thank you Evelynn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


Beautiful. This pulled some heartstrings. Very nice :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Heart wrenching. I can feel the emotions you wrote. This is seriously very beautifully written. Well done. Simply loved it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


still nice and i love it thanks for sharing the talent you have.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Ah, so emotional. I love the rhythm and rhyming. Not more than a few words wasted.

Posted 11 Months Ago


I really enjoyed reading your poem. You had such great emotion and meaning which you easily tied together with the rest of your poem. Keep up the good work!

Posted 11 Months Ago



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Evelynn
Evelynn

Roanoke, VA



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