It's Fine

It's Fine

A Poem by Evelynn

It’s fine
I didn’t expect you to care
It’s fine
I get that you’ll never be here
So it’s fine
When you leave to go be with her
So it’s fine
Cause I know that she’s the one your prefer
Don’t get me wrong
I’m not saying that I don’t love you
Don’t be mistaken
But I know you don’t love me too
But it’s fine
I will never be the one
And it’s fine
Cause my heart’s not even close to done

© 2017 Evelynn



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I'm thinking it not fine at all ...sigh
But time does heal almost all wounds..
Sad, but thought-full.......

Jazzy

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


" Here's a clue, nobody's fine." Hank the octopus from Finding Dory. I often wonder why perfect strangers ask us how we are...it's not like they care...so we just say fine and move along because telling someone who doesn't care is the same as telling nobody at all. It's sad there aren't more empathetic people in the world...or a few more at least with any feeling at all. I understood the write. Can't say I like it...but I understand it. And you express it well.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Evelynn

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much
Fabian G. Franklin

2 Weeks Ago

You have a clean simple style. I really like that. The object of language is communication and if yo.. read more
Evelynn

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you. It's pretty funny, I'm good at communicating by writing down words, but put me in front o.. read more
Words of a unreturned love, quite bitter and painful. Nice and short.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


So few words that say much to a broken heart of love;-] Nice expression.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Very striaght and to the point. Well crafted.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


I can't determine whether the message here is irony, denial or bitterness. The strongest vibration I get is that it really isn't fine.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago



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Evelynn
Evelynn

Roanoke, VA



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