It's Fine

It's Fine

A Poem by Evelynn

It’s fine
I didn’t expect you to care
It’s fine
I get that you’ll never be here
So it’s fine
When you leave to go be with her
So it’s fine
Cause I know that she’s the one your prefer
Don’t get me wrong
I’m not saying that I don’t love you
Don’t be mistaken
But I know you don’t love me too
But it’s fine
I will never be the one
And it’s fine
Cause my heart’s not even close to done

© 2017 Evelynn



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wow! Excellent flow and very effective. This makes you feel the emotions without the flowery language. I like the repetition of its fine because i think people say that to themselves a lot, even when its not.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Evelynn

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much!
Like Fabian said in his review to you, "Nobody's fine." I went through that a few years ago. Its so hard to accept that he wanted someone else! Nice writing! I like it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Evelynn

2 Months Ago

Thank you:)
Gawd I love all your poems, there so moving.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Evelynn

2 Months Ago

Awwww, thank you so much!
......so sad.....so powerful......so relatable! Love the structure, the lines and rhymes dance along the musicality, and the narrative is brilliant! Well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Evelynn

2 Months Ago

Aww, thanks! :)
I'm thinking it not fine at all ...sigh
But time does heal almost all wounds..
Sad, but thought-full.......

Jazzy

Posted 6 Months Ago


" Here's a clue, nobody's fine." Hank the octopus from Finding Dory. I often wonder why perfect strangers ask us how we are...it's not like they care...so we just say fine and move along because telling someone who doesn't care is the same as telling nobody at all. It's sad there aren't more empathetic people in the world...or a few more at least with any feeling at all. I understood the write. Can't say I like it...but I understand it. And you express it well.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Evelynn

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much
Fabian G. Franklin

6 Months Ago

You have a clean simple style. I really like that. The object of language is communication and if yo.. read more
Evelynn

6 Months Ago

Thank you. It's pretty funny, I'm good at communicating by writing down words, but put me in front o.. read more
Words of a unreturned love, quite bitter and painful. Nice and short.

Posted 6 Months Ago


So few words that say much to a broken heart of love;-] Nice expression.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Very striaght and to the point. Well crafted.

Posted 6 Months Ago


I can't determine whether the message here is irony, denial or bitterness. The strongest vibration I get is that it really isn't fine.

Posted 6 Months Ago



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Evelynn
Evelynn

Roanoke, VA



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