One Day

One Day

A Poem by Evelynn

I know that you’re gone
But I can feel you near
I saw you leave
So why do I feel you here
Is it simply the memories
Or is it something more
Is it my dreams
Is it me wanting the before
It should have been me
You should have won
You should be here
And I should be gone
I don’t know what to do
Or how to act
I’m scared to fail
Or to retract
Why did you leave
Did you not care
Please, I love you
I need you with me here
Please just come back
What do I have to say
Please, I beg you
Even if it’s just for one day

© 2017 Evelynn



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DX Ahhh, my heart! I really love your poetry,it's packed with emotion and reality and just shdunoshjaiojdishdeeeeeaoiehua9hafeoeu. It's too good for this world!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Evelynn

10 Months Ago

Awwwww! Thank you! :)
Beautifully written. I feel a sense of loss of someone so dear to you. They were your life, a part of your heart and your soul. Very moving!

Posted 10 Months Ago


very real, sounds almost musical

Posted 11 Months Ago


Short lines depicts the uncertainty or something.Well rhymed!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Evelynn

11 Months Ago

Thank you!!!
Rubick

11 Months Ago

You're welcome!
yes!!!!!!!!!!...absolutely love this piece of work.....this is so cutting and deep for me...totally captured me and i love it...a couple of the lines had me hanging for a moment they where so well written....awesome.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Evelynn

11 Months Ago

Awww, thank you
The yearning for love. One sided or not. We want more even if we break our heart. I liked the need and the want of the words. Thank you Evelynn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Months Ago


this is me now. thanks for putting it to words. I can feel the longing for someone here. specially the last lines.
well penned

Posted 1 Year Ago


Hmmm. Interesting story being painted here. When someone you love leaves, the yearning to have them back is really strong. Nicely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A plea for lost love to return. The message touches the reader's heart. Good clarity and flow.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sometimes we realize certain loves weren't meant to remain by our sides. But how do u make the heart understand? Beautiful write.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Evelynn
Evelynn

Roanoke, VA



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