Another Round

Another Round

A Poem by Evelynn

So here’s to another round
Once again the cycle has started
I will meet you and fall in love
And you will leave me brokenhearted
You will tell me it wasn’t meant to be
And then you will walk out the door
I will stand there in shock
But then I will fall to the floor
I won’t leave my bed for days
And I will cry myself to sleep
I’ll do everything I said I wouldn’t
And for a while, that’s how I’ll keep
But for now, let’s be head over heels
And promise each other forever
We’ll say that we love each other
And the day that we part is never

© 2017 Evelynn



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This is so true, sadly I think we can all relate.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Evelynn

2 Months Ago

Yea, it's a sad subject but it's one that most people can relate to
This idea terrifies me. I absolutely love the poem, but it terrifies me, and that probably means you’ve gotten your point across.
Lines 7-12 are my favorite as they feel very real.

I enjoyed reading it!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Evelynn

2 Months Ago

Awww! Thanks! :)
H L Rose

2 Months Ago

Of course!
I have no words......my voice is in my awe!! Very clever, and very well done! Much enjoyed!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Evelynn

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much! :)
This is so beautifully written! Obviously you've seen the face of heartbreak, and it really shows here. The way that this hit me was just shattering! You're an amazing poet!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Evelynn

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Yeah, what you wrote is correct. Relatable it is.
After all, a good write, I must say:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Evelynn

4 Months Ago

Thank you! :)
Honest words and real life tone to the words. It is sad what we do to each other. Twist sweet love to bitterness. Thank you Evelynn for sharing the amazing words and poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Evelynn

4 Months Ago

Thank You!!!
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Aww. It's heartwrenching! It's wonderful how a person can effect us so much.
Good work. =)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Evelynn

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Ghania

5 Months Ago

You're welcome.
Sadly true. That's the cycle. Very nicely written.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Evelynn

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much :)
Wow! That was beautifully written, I loved everything about it. Especially the way you transferred emotion. Keep up the good work!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Evelynn

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much!
Sometimes one takes a chance on love.. hoping this time round it takes...Not something I have experienced personally.. but have been told by many that love is elusive.

Interesting.................

Jazzy


Posted 5 Months Ago



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Evelynn
Evelynn

Roanoke, VA



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