I'm Sorry

I'm Sorry

A Poem by Evelynn

I never saw it coming

I never even knew

I thought you were so happy

Can’t believe that wasn’t true

I didn’t know you were in pain

I didn’t see your tears

I thought you were fine

But you’ve been acting for years

I’ve read your letter

Over and over again

I read about your hurt

I should have known by then

I could’ve tried to save you

If only I could see

You should still be with us

But you left this world, and me

So, I’m sorry

I’m sorry for being blind

I’m sorry, so sorry

Sorry for not questioning those lines

Those songs you wrote

Always about death

About loving and losing

And taking your last breath

As you wished

I will say

You did well

Until my final days

But I won’t cry

Cause you wouldn’t want me to

And even if tears gather in my eyes

I won’t let it leak through


© 2018 Evelynn



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This tugs at my very soul. Brilliant job, dear. :)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Evelynn

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much!
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Oh wow! This is so good, I enjoyed this emotional write. So well expressed

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


O wow. I loved your poem, the thought and emotions you put into it where exceptional. You did a good job with such an emotional poem, and ended it exactly like Jonghyun would have wanted.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


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Evelynn

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks, it means a lot
A very sad poem dear Evelynn. I lost two brothers to suicide. No-one knew they were struggling. Their death taught me. To listen and to pay attention. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


OhMyGosh this is so emotional... I'm not sure how to explain how I feel... I guess I should start with I'm sorry for your loss... Wow... This is a real heart breaker

Posted 1 Month Ago


Evelynn

1 Month Ago

Thanks, I wrote this after I found out about Jonghyun's death
So sad to realize something like that. Well written and potraying strong emotion.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Wow. It touched my heart, so painful, I loved it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Evelynn

1 Month Ago

Thank you!!!
Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

You're welcome.
It was a good read...the lines were flowing so fast....just loved the way you portrayed a piece of story , in other words, a poem.
Really enjoyed it:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Evelynn

1 Month Ago

Thank you!!!
The good ol' lyrical style.. you wrote it in a hurry I reckon...

Good one.. 👍

Posted 1 Month Ago


Evelynn

1 Month Ago

Yea, I wrote it in like 5 minuets, and thanks
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Rubick

1 Month Ago

Welcome milady

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Evelynn
Evelynn

Roanoke, VA



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