WHERE?

Where does love go when it’s ended?

Like dreams and fear

Does it find a longing heart

To happen in?

If you awake with the joy of caring

Anxious to live a day so vibrant

Please ask from whence your love came

And tell it that I wish it well.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like the personification of "love"...in this piece...ask where it came from and wish it well...

you do these short poems with significant meaning, so well.

[DrD]

Thanks Jacob, it's always great to have you drop by. I appreciate your kind comments.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

I hate sounding like a broken record but WOW.. such a short piece that holds such a wondrous thought, idea, dream... Simply beautiful.

[DrD]

We're beginning to sound like a mutual admiration society, right? I truly enjoy your work and am thankful that you are here viewing mine.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Haha, yeah I think we are sounding a bit like that... although I am dumbfounded my your writing skills... so beautiful, I was deeply touched by your poems. Thank you for leading me to your work!

[Sheila Kline]

When a dream ends it lives on in the memory of the dreamer if they choose;
Fear only consumes as much of one as is allowed;
Love ends and as a dream, and as fear it goes where the lover desires -though part of it may remain within the being of the one who loves it is up to that individual to decide where next to place it.......a heart may continue to yearn for that which was, and for that which was to be so yes, if one is able to realize the beauty of love and the joy it brings, then one should be grateful.
Tell it that another wishes the once longing heart to appreciate the new found love is a gift filled with remorse for that which was from the well wisher.
Beautiful, soulful..........

[DrD]

Thank you Shiela. You are always so kind. I appreciate you dearly.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sweet and soft ponderings..
Love has no end..I believe
As long as there are waiting hearts
And souls like yours
To wish it well..

xoxoox Jazz

[DrD]

Thank you dear one, I hope all is well with you. As always you send me kind words. I can only hope one day they will be deserved.

[J. J. Nightingale]

They are well deserved ................♥ ......... You r welcome... J.