Ambivalence

This is a poem about my friend who turned out to be...different

  You didn't even 

Ask me to stop

I was the foolish

But you knew that,right?

You wanted me to 

Come home to you

It was almost begging

I knew you did

But I guess I didn't

I was a fool

Why did you blind me?

Like that,I thought

That grin on my lips

You knew how to destroy it

Then I thought deep down

It wasn't you

That couldn't keep me

I was no bliss

But I should have never

Fallen in your game

I was too stupid

To love you more

To care the most

But when you moved on

I wasn't sure

What was I doing

Back in your home

Maybe you ignored that

But I knew for sure

You did love her

Though you tried too hard

Within your soul

And you knew that I was

Pulling you back

Back to our world

But then your shdow 

Couldn't fit

Not anymore

I tried to widen

But I guess you were

Busy destroying

What was randomly remained

What did you want me

To do back then?

I guess you wanted

Me by your side

But why whoud I

Be too unsure?

I could not blame you

I was the one

Hiding behind your lies

You've played me right

Your lies were collapsing

And my soul was bleeding

I was just young

Farewell to everything we had

It was too obvious

We were that hurt

I remember clearly...

And then you pulled the trigger

Which, I couldn't dodge

It was too over

This time you won

It went right through my chest

That I couldn't breathe

It was too awful

I could barely confess

The last thing I saw

Was you carrying me

You felt so guilty

You would deny it

But now we're even, i guess

Bittersweet goodbye

That was the end

We couldn't help it

It was our fate

Author's Note

Hi guys I hope you enjoy it. Please criticize
Thank you xx

Reviews

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Okay. So considering English is not your first language, this is quite good. The only thing i would say is, your work is not properly structured. When you read each line, it has to make sense on its own, not necessarily a sentence. For example
You wanted me to come home to you... That could be a line.
Also, starting a poem with but...there should be something that comes before it, you can remove it in the first line, its not necessary. I hope this is helpful.