farewell

I wrote this for someone that I thought I loved. He turned out to be a jerk but at least I got a poem out of it.

I loved you

you said you loved me too

 

you asked me a question

I wasn't ready for that inquisition

 

I overreacted majorly

I'll admit wholeheartedly

 

It was a mistake I made

one I hope to have paid

 

You said these things I know aren't true

Then you said "I didn't even like you"

 

Confusion hit and I'm sore

but I guess this doesn't matter...anymore

 

What I've come to say, and taken so long to do

is I hope you find someone worth you

 

Some one who will understand you

who will always remain loyal and true

 

farewell and adieu.

 

 

Author's Note

please comment good or bad I want them!

Reviews

[paparapapa]

Gotta love the rhymes! Sorry, I just love rhyming poems. Haha. This one's really sad, but I liked it! This poem shows the complication of love and man. Keep on writing! ;)

[Regan Meade]

Like I said before. Its really good (and i don't like rhyming). Sorry for what happened.