Tuesday

Tuesday

A Poem by EylonBear
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I thought of this while coming home from school. thinking of one night I spent with an amazing person.

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thoughts of that night swirl in my mind,
watching as our fingers intertwined.
your hand brushes up my side,
and a shiver goes down like a tide.
I look up at you and you smile
with that I could go a mile
you brush your hand across my cheek,
my heart beats so hard i cannot speak.
you care about me, I know you do,
I just wish to be together forever to.

© 2011 EylonBear


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Short, simple, yet says so much. I love it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short, simple but amazingly beautiful. Oh, and sweet! :)) Great write. Keep on writing. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is a wonderfully expressed poem - a memory of lovely delight.


Posted 12 Years Ago


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I ended up clicking on this because the poem's picture matched my avatar! Haha.
Anyways, I agree that it's short and sweet. I found it to be super cute. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow, it's short and sweet but so full of meaning; absolutely beautiful!

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EylonBear
EylonBear

Manchester, NH



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My name is Deena. I started writing in junior high with a novel. I never finished it. since then I've written a number of poems. a coupld short stories and I have one completed novel in the revision p.. more..

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