Young Love

My first free verse. And a warning for the readers: It's not a very happy, beautiful poem!

Ahh young love

So undisturbed by filth

So pure and care-free

So innocent and amazing

So wonderful and happy

The way it lifts you up

And gives you that warm fuzzy feeling

And they way that special someone

Can lead you on and crush you

The way they take advantage of you

There's no such thing as someone special

In the end they'll all leave you

Destroy your hopes and feelings

The way they call you theirs

Then throw you out the door

Ahh young love

 

Author's Note

Haha tell me what you think, I'll even take flames ;)

Reviews

[M.K. Jawdat]

Nice, sad but a fact. Nice one

[Anonymous]

So very true... I love the way you set up the "ryhthm" of this poem... Wonderful. The way you create the image in this modern way, it makes me shiver when I read on. Simply wonderful, Hanna-chan. Simply wonderful.