Not Meant to Be

Not Meant to Be

A Poem by Undying Hate (Hanna)
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Can't really give a good description. Needed to get my feelings out about someone...just read and enjoy :)

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You used to love me

I still do

Now you don't

I wish I didn't

You love another

I hate watching that

But not because it's not me,

But because of who it is

She's not right for you

You don't know what she's done

If you did you wouldn't love her

But you'll never see

What's right for you isn't her

But maybe it's not  me

She's not good for you

I care about you more

But I'll show you that I'm better

Not because of my feelings for you

But because I wouldn't break your heart

I wouldn't let you fall apart

I think you know you can't have her

But it pains me to see you try

I know you'll get heartbroken

I'll do anything to stop that from happening

Maybe sometime you'll see

How much you mean to me

Or maybe we're just not meant to be


© 2010 Undying Hate (Hanna)



Author's Note

Undying Hate (Hanna)
I just needed to get my feelings out about this. I know it's not that great or the best I've ever done but...yeah anyway review! Hope you enjoyed! Flames accepted.

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its amazingly written keep it up!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I actually really enjoy this. I enjoy the stream of consciousness flow of it and how real and raw it is.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is pretty darn good, very emotional, enjoyed

Posted 4 Years Ago


The poem hold back a lot; bitterness, selfishness and immaturity. But all you have written is true and that make sense, because in pushing your limit, you swallow your pride all the negativity you have done...it is your love that matters! That is the usual reaction if you really love somebody. Keep it up! good piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


bullShit poem, but i love that you have tried,..... about your feeling you are in love with the wrong person, accept it, move on. Or just think like this, a person who can leave you now, will leave you in the future as well, then why to go for him, better wait and find the guy who will stick around, care and love only you. so that you wont get hurt

Posted 5 Years Ago


this is really good... i hate when you cant make someone see the truth, though... very good write

Posted 7 Years Ago


it sounds very good to me very well put together

Posted 7 Years Ago


*sigh* I know the feeling well. I think you captured this feeling nicely. ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 3, 2010
Last Updated on January 3, 2010
Tags: unrequited, fighting, love, feelings, sad

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Undying Hate (Hanna)
Undying Hate (Hanna)

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