Heavens Gate

The pathway is never easy but the gates await covered in Gold.

HEAVENS GATE:

The time we spend inside our minds
The searching thoughts we try to find
Where do these go- do we ever know

These thoughts they twist and they turn
Within sub conscience lie and burn
What is it that the heart must learn

The fears and tears of life so true
Is all a journey left to you
But yet at times it all just seems
To be a part of an unending dream

Through torrents of torment and
Stormy seas- its all achievable
Upon our knees- the inner turmoil
Put to rest when your vision is
Clearer after each test- so lift
Your eyes up to the skies

Where mercy and grace complete
This race- its not about the date
Or place but the pursuing of
A sacred place standing in front
Of heavens gate....

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

An incredibly inspirational and insightful poem for all who read it. The most powerful part of this poem for me was... "This race- its not about the date... Or place but the pursuing of... A sacred place..." A well-crafted summation to an impressive poem. Nice work.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Many thanks for your time and comment, yes it’s all in the being without a date or time or place, it just is🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and worthwhile words and thoughts shared. If we are lucky and attempt a good life. We can read the gates of heaven. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou so much, really appreciate it, yes the choice is ours to make 🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and you are welcome dear Poet.

[magenta24uk]

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[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I really appreciate it, will look at your blog🌹