Did You Ever

Take time to be sensitive to others feelings and hearts

'Did You Ever?'

Have you
Ever
Taken time-
To wonder
About
His others
Feel?
To know
If their
Hearts
Beat,
Or bleed-
If their
Mind is
Clear,
Or
Full of
Tears?
Are there
Fears-
That hold
Fast,
To the
Past,
No matter
What it
Has cost?

Do they
Suffocate
When
Having made
Mistakes-
Because
Others
Make them
Feel
Incomplete,
Not real?

How do you
Think
They feel?
Or-
Don't you
Think
You need
To deal
With people
Who need
To heal?

How do you
Feel?
Or-
Is it
Not real?
This whole
Existance,
Which can
Disappear
In an
Instance?

Money-
Like a
Rope-
Doesn't help
Us
Cope!
It may
Seem,
But
Its all
A dream!

Love-
Is it sent
From above?

Is it
A feeling,
That seems
To be
Reeling out
Of
Control?
Can you
Feel it?
You just
Don't
Know?

Truth-
They say
It sets
You free-
Is that
You
Or
Me?
Do you
Really know?
I don't
Think so-

What will
It take,
For you
To snap
Out
Of
Your
Fake
Comfort zone?

Do you
Know that
It is
All prone,
To what
Goes around-
Comes around,
Without
The
Slightest sound-
The silence
That steals-
What
We all
Thought,
Was so
Real...

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

An original, creative piece packed with rich questions and lessons. For me the exceptionally short lines were more of a distraction, an interruption to the flow in this piece. I like short lines, especially for this type of poem; yet, this seemed choppy for me. Still you're a good writer with tremendous creativity. I look forward to reading more.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your honesty, I used that way of writing, as I write as I feel and think and I think it was to create awareness to the urgency of the application of thought needed towards the individual statements?🌹Glad you liked it and Thankyou again🌹

[Neville]

yes indeed.. what goes around, comes around... tis them circles... we call it karma... a nice original write K......

Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thanking you- yes until the circle is complete- or will it ever be complete- spiral maybe?🌹

[Neville]

spiral it is then.... upwards and onwards.... N :)

[Dinesh Kumar]

nice poem i really enjoyed reading it

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your kindness🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to change. Each of us. Afraid to leave the comfort zone. I liked your thoughts an your questions in the poetry. I was glad to had found you today. You are a talented and wonderful writer.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Bless you and your kindness, I write out of my heart and it flows when I need to right, the world can be a cold lonely place if you don’t look deeper🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and I love your work.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[magenta24uk]

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[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Many thanks for your kindness🌹