Beauty Inside

Beauty Inside

A Poem by Thoughts In Time
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Beauty so much deeper than the eye sees.

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Beauty Inside:

True beauty
You are-
Serene
First only
Green-
Then as if
In a dream
Your colour
Unfolds-
Life’s story
Untold-

Yellow
Oh so mellow-
Searching for the
Suns light-
Your life has
Yet begun-

Through the process
You’ll grow less
And
Express more-
True beauty
That we are all
Looking for-
The more you open
The power becomes
Potent-
Hypnotising and
Mesmorizing-

Your petals so
Complete-
Nothing can compete
With the beauty
Found inside-
Just let go
And let yourself
Grow-
Otherwise
You’ll just
Never
Know...

© 2018 Thoughts In Time



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"Just let go
And let yourself
Grow-
Otherwise
You’ll just
Never
Know... "
What a true message you share with us. We all go through life trying to control this and that, carrying heavy weights of this and that, trying to change others before oursleves in futility but to find out we have to chill. let go and search ourselves first for truth. Truth will become a good power when we grasp it.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

I do agree. The weight lifted will be enormous. He is in control indeed.
Thoughts In Time

6 Days Ago

Amen He is a wonder working God🌹
Sami Khalil

5 Days Ago

:)...................



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Gee
That is the beauty that we only find when taking the time to truly know a person.My long suffering wife is the mos wonderful person with a beautiful soul. Enjoyed the early morning read. I was gonna refer to you, as I do with others, by your monikas initials. Hmmmm


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Thoughts In Time

1 Week Ago

Yes beauty is what makes the heart of the soul,Thankyou for your time I appreciate it🌹
Gee

1 Week Ago

My pleasure
Take no chances. Know no love or the possibilities of laughter and fun. We need to know Hypnotising and
Mesmorizing- . These are the moments where people celebrate life and living. Thank you dear Poet for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


Thoughts In Time

6 Days Ago

If there’s no broken boundaries of love love cannot prosper, mad uncontrollable love quenches the .. read more
"Just let go
And let yourself
Grow-
Otherwise
You’ll just
Never
Know... "
What a true message you share with us. We all go through life trying to control this and that, carrying heavy weights of this and that, trying to change others before oursleves in futility but to find out we have to chill. let go and search ourselves first for truth. Truth will become a good power when we grasp it.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

I do agree. The weight lifted will be enormous. He is in control indeed.
Thoughts In Time

6 Days Ago

Amen He is a wonder working God🌹
Sami Khalil

5 Days Ago

:)...................
No matter how pretty a woman is, I learned that it's the inside that counts. The same with men too. When they speak, the story of who they are inside will unfold.

Not a critique or correction, just wondering what first only green means. Also, Your petals so Compete-
Nothing can compete

petals complete?

I like this poem.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Thoughts In Time

1 Week Ago

Thankyou for you time and comment, I have corrected-green refers to the flower before it opens, its .. read more

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Added on February 3, 2018
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Thoughts In Time
Thoughts In Time

Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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