‘Wondering’

‘Wondering’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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From the depth of the heart emotions spring🌹

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Wondering:

I sit in the silence
Of here and now-
The sun rays
Falling across
My brow-
The warmth
It brings
My heart
It sings-
Pure bliss
And
Harmony-

There’s a gentle
Softness all
Around-
The ticking
Is the only sound-
My hearts beat
Flutters with
The thoughts
Of you-

Oh how
I’ve waited
I’ve hesitated
I’ve hung around
Waiting to be found-

What we give
Out -
I believe the
Heart that’s
Meant for me-
Will see the seeds
Been sown -
Eventually coming
Around
In that instant
Of the sound -
Releasing the heart
From unleavened
Ground-

Oh the perfect peace
It’s within reach-
And written within
Each lesson we teach-

To see the meaning
Behind each prop
You’ve got to drop-
From glory and writing
Your own life story-
Onto your knees
The creator you
Will please-

In sanctification and
Surrender-
There’s a brand new
Agenda-
Lined in gold
Edging ever story
To be told-

The centre soft
As silk-
Glowing and
Overflowing with
Love of only one
Kind-
Released from
Your mind-

Be still dear
Heart-
What’s meant
To be your
Destiny -
Will never
Pass you by.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
25 February 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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Many gracefully-stated ideas to encompass the idea of "wondering" . . . but this doesn't really sound like wondering to me . . . it sounds like you know exactly what you see & feel & mean to convey. Despite your cloud-like expressions of tentative contemplation, this message ends up feeling like a direct path to what you know to be your inner truth about such things (I don't mean this is a bad thing, just different than what your title might've suggested) *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

You are quite right and there it becomes the wondering- must keep them thinking in the knowing- we k.. read more
I felt this on so many levels. "What's meant to be your destiny will never pass you by."

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

It is what it is if we only know what we know and believe- faith unlocks many doors- glad it inspire.. read more
Falanne Shanta

6 Years Ago

You're absolutely right and you're welcome
I KNOW how I hear this behind MY eyes and yet I DO wonder how you voice it within your own. The last stanza is strong enough to be standalone AND a whispered quote.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

The softness of the shared emotions within words and worlds apart...listen and you shall hear🌹
Chris

6 Years Ago

Exactly...
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

The pleasure is mine🌹
Love, sweetest and the best days of our life.
The centre soft
As silk-
"Glowing and
Overflowing with
Love of only one
Kind-
Released from
Your mind"
It is sad. We allow love to change. Once needed love become less needed. Maybe new love. Love for our children take a piece from us? A wonderful poem dear Kelly.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Yes there’s always hope when it comes to true love, love overcomes all🌹
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are right dear Kelly.

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Added on February 25, 2018
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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

Essex, United Kingdom



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