‘Frozen Tears’

Frozen tears a blessing🌹

Frozen Tears:

Frozen tears
Are
Falling from
The heavens-

A sign for all
To look and
See-
There’s more
To life than
You and me-

Look how tender
Flakes they
Fall-
White
And light and
Oh so free-

Like feathers
Softly fallen
From a pillow
In a fight-
Set the beauty
Out in
Flight-

So turn your
Face
Up to the
Heavens -
And close
Your eyes
And say a
Prayer-

Let’s pray
That
Unity and forgiveness
Will fall with every
Frozen tear
Out here-

I hear the solid
Tears are calling
And begging
Us to stop
And see -
That theres
So much more
To you and
Me-

There’s love
That lies
Un nurtured-
There’s pain
That needs to
Turn
to rain-
To flow and fall
Like rivers washing

And turn lost
Feelings into
Flames-

To start a circle
Full of feeling-
And caring
Sharing
Hopeful
Souls-
Without it
Love will never
Grow-

So catch a
Frozen
Teardrop -
Hold it close and
Feel it’s warmth-
And promise
With the next
Falling feather -
That you’ll
Forgive and
Give a helping hand

Tears
Don’t last forever-
But promises
Of ice can last
A while-
Until
They melt
You keep on
Praying-
It’s a way
To reach those
Needing help-

So turn your face
Towards the
Heavens-
Feel each
Blessing as
It falls -
Remember
Each frozen
Teardrop
That fell
To teach
And thaw-

Listen to what
The teardrop
Tells you-
Softly catch
Them as they fall-
Resting in the knowing
That
Love has come
To call.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
28 February 2018

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

very beautiful, it's flow is graceful. As i look outside and see a flower here and there, your poem carries me to a winter's wonderland.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your kind words, I’m glad it excites your imagination🌹

[lightsong]

I always say that I want to be a "snowflake" not a "star", "ice" not "fire"! and Your enchanting poem just told a reason why... magically it touched my heart, with loving warmth, some really really brilliant verses and expressions You've composed, they are not just "written", they "mean" something.

Thank You for sharing this gorgeous, generous beauty... a splendid piece that pours with Your lovely self, You are a loving person indeed!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You are just as special and kind and I Thankyou for takingbtime- what are we if we cannot touch the heart and soul of another- blessings always🌹

[lightsong]

....... :) .......

[McEltic]

This is wonderful heart felt writing. If we could take these fresh thoughts and flash freeze them into pellets, we could pass them out later as needed and not at all a bitter pill to swallow :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your kind words- the thoughts here made me cry while writing it , glad you enjoyed it🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, wonderful and beautiful use of words dear Kelly.
"Listen to what
The teardrop
Tells you-
Softly catch
Them as they fall-
Resting in the knowing
That
Love has come
To call."
When love called. We must open the door. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes more love needed everywhere make world a better place- sometimes people to scared to allow others in but until we do we cannot help others- Thankyou for reading🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome dear Kelly.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Each flake is like a fingerprint upon the heart - each different, unique and individual: just as you have poetically entwined throughout your lovely write! I enjoyed the flow and drifting words throughout this read - lovely! :-)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate your time 🌹

[Mrudula Rani]

What a passionate flow of sentiments! And a positive force you inject in to our thoughts " ..... with the next falling feather that you forgive and give a helping hand...."
" ..... so turn your face towards heavens feel each blessing...." wonderful writing.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou so very much it means the world when I can touch heart via my words- oh the beauty of nature, she’s never wrong we need to learn all the lessons we can from her, many thanks🌹

[Mrudula Rani]

Entirely my pleasure.

[Cole Thomas]

Made me feel as if I was walking home in the snow and these were thoughts just lingering around in my head. Nice job.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate it - I hope these thoughts will stay always each time you see snow-I appreciate🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Kelly,

if only we could do what this poem professes....calls for---
if only we would stop and look up...and let that peaceful snow hit us in the face, let love, understanding and compassion hit is in the heart.

j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh how I wish this - would be a dream come true- I cried while writing my own poem🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for understanding and for taking the time- bless you🌹