‘Sometime..’

Look past the visible🌹

‘Sometime...’

Sometime may
Sometime might

Some time may
Take flight
Tonight-

Up where dreams
And moonlight
Beams
Will serenade
And hold you
Tight-

Some things
Do
And
Some things
Don’t-
Quite fit
The desires
Of what
Life
Requires-

Sometimes plans
We don’t
Understand
Are set against
A timer -
A small reminder

Of now and here
Is where the sum
Of time is found-

Quit running
Around -
It’s all in
The book
Of
Life
Been bound

Quieten
The sound -
Memories
Spiralling
Down

What can we do

Minutes
Seconds
Hours

Become few

What happened
To the
Me
And you

If only I
Knew -
The knees
Upon
The pew-

I see you

But me -

I see you
Weep-

No need to
Cry -
I had to
Die-
It was part
Of a bigger
Plan-

You won’t
Understand
But He’s
The man
That holds
Each and
Everyone’s
Life within
His hands-

Sometimes
You need to
Grow-
Learn to
Let go-

True faith
Then only
You
Will know.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
1 March 201

Reviews

[lightsong]

Your words reach into each heart, Your style touch each heart so emotively, You bring out the thoughts and the emotions clearly into the surface... when I began to reach Your ending I became so emotionally touched... Thank You*

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

No Thankyou for your time of sharing and wisdom so special - it’s worth the journey in the end when you see and become the light- Thankyou for the special you -you are 🌹

[lightsong]

It's really a pleasure meeting someone like You "🌹"!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

The pleasure is mine- all part of time 🌹

[Richard McLin]

Very thought provoking. I don't think this poem has just one meaning. I feel like it can change depending when you read it, how you read it, and what you are feeling or needing when you read it. I loved it. Great work
-Richard

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes it’s all in the feeling.. thankyou🌹

[Wesley]

I love this poem. I love the faith it speaks of. To me faith is action. I love the thought, that love transcends the grave and goes on forever.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and yes you are so right 🌹

[genocide]

is this saying hold on to your dreams never let them go

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes without faith no dreams can come true!🌹

[genocide]

yeah give me some more reviews on my provile my dear