‘So’

‘So’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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'So'

When I look
Back in time
I don't wonder
What could
Have been mine?

I see the change
Of space that
Came with grace-

I became wise
And won the
Biggest
Prize-

The inner peace
That creeps up
Slowly
And
Fills all the
Chambers of my
Mind-

But it took
Time to
Find-
Like a mountain
Turning
Into a fountain-
Energies
Released,
Followed by
A peace that
Is not lonely
But
Its only the
Self
That can
Experience
This wealth
Of our
Sanity-
That passes all
Fleshly
Vanity-

Time turns around
And the
Beginning
Becomes the
End-
And there's no need
To set a trend-

What I learnt is
The biggest friend
Lies within,
Away from
All that
Gliitters and
Glam-
Then I
Realised exactly
Who
I am..

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹



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Kelly - So true and so beautifully stated. We often spend so much time
looking, searching for that which we already have. If only we had sense
enough to recognize and appreciate it.

Take care - Dave

Posted 9 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

Yes true words but sometimes life is like an exam paper we need to complete first go see the results.. read more
Life teaches us. We have enough. I liked your words and deep thoughts. I believe. Make the good days last longing and try to forget the bad days. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

Yes life teaches us as king as we are willing to learn-the only day we have control over is today, m.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are right dear Kelly.
A welcome realization. It is the "biggest prize" life offers. Thanks for the reminder and the journey shared.

Posted 9 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

Only my pleasure I’m glad you enjoyed it🌹
Contentment - the holy grail of sorts, well done, good read.

Posted 9 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

Thankyou so very much for you time and kindness, I really appreciate it🌹
the best gifts of all...the feeling of self-worth and the feeling of contentment with one's life.

nicely expressed.
j.

Posted 9 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

Thankyou for visiting I really appreciate 🌹
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

your poetry moves me.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

And I have no words for your wonderful words and insight🌹
That is the most sacred pathway, finding the doorways that lead into the depths of you. All else is the shallows, the superfluous plastic life. This is so encouraging, finding peace, finding life, finding hope. May others read your words and know they can find these too. :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

Thankyou for you and you are so special as the cold wind brings the snow and fresh life may you to w.. read more
An owl on the moon

9 Months Ago

I deeply appreciate your warm blessings here in the chill of winter. Yes, all shall be well.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

And it shall for nothing is not available for those who believe🌹
I really enjoyed this. Had no issue what you were trying to convey. Good stuff.

Posted 9 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

Thankyou I really appreciate your time and understanding 🌹
I really liked the line about mountains becoming fountains. You just keep bringing great work, and it becomes more and more of a pleasure to read your work. Great job, yet again.
-Richard

Posted 9 Months Ago


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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

And thanking you kind sir, I’m glad you enjoyed it🌹

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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